Warrior Princess

Oh my gosh!! This was funny! Short and sweet. Well I don't really know what to say about it, because there's not really much to critique....very nice! Yay!! Write on, ...

Well, welcome to the weird, wild, and wonderful world of poetry, dear! I am really hesitant to seriously critique anything here, as it is my personal belief that poetry is, ...

Oh my goodness. This is a wonderful poem. It obviously is very scatterbrained, but that happens to me more often than I want to think about: I feel so much, ...

Wow, I found this poem a bit disturbing, illustrating what very likely were the speaker's final moments. Your detail and tension are both very good. One thing I would suggest ...

We stand by the wall, three shadows in the splash of moonlight. He lifts her to the window, and she disappears gracefully into the darkened house. Next he helps me ...

Wow, that was...different. Very, very different. In a good way. I'm not going to pretend I really understood it, but that's not always a bad thing. I suppose it was ...

Aw!! This poem is so sweet and funny; it made me smile. I thought of my own dog while reading it, a golden retriever who is utterly obsessed with me ...

Hm, I like this. I don't quite get the "daughter" thing, maybe you could tell us a little more about the person whose daughter she is? BUt the girl is ...

Slow fade Dying in my arms Breathe in, breathe out Your strength ebbs away Like your heart's blood Petals falling from a scarlet rose While I am powerless to save ...

From light I looked upon the world Lost in darkness The countless voids of empty human souls Calling, pleading Rescue us Someone must step forward As the stars rain down ...

OH MY GOSH BEST SONG EVER!!!!!!!!!! GO YWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HO-LY-CRAP. This was freakin beautiful. Perhaps not the most refined stylistically, but it had a certain raw power, like stream of consciousness. What can I say? Beautiful.

Otherworld Walls of crystal blue Between the floor and ceiling Here I can fly, suspended halfway down The dim-lit world floating by in slow motion I descend Moving softly On ...

Dear Atlanta, Star-speckled towers: Proud and beautiful, You outshine the night sky. The darkness cannot dim your brilliance; It can only find its way inside. Dear Atlanta, Foam-swirling sea of ...

OH MY GOSH. That was probably the most beautiful thing I have read this year. Your imagery is lovely and dreamlike, absolutely fitting. I really can't find anything to critique ...